Translation review: [ChihiroDesuYo] No Game No Life 02 This entry was posted by Vale.
There’s a “you’re so angry”, in case someone wondered.
“Oath” just feels so weird here…
Not “shall not be questioned”, just not regulated.
I like it how they matched the line to the echoes.
A “not” missing there. “I can’t”
I think this could’ve been handled better.
No typeset?
Could be better, could be worse.
What’s wrong? This line. It’s literally “what should we do?”
She’s talking to herself. Why remove that from the line?
Not to expand, but to get back/restore the country.
Conclusion: there it goes
Accuracy: 7/10; Flow: 8/10; Atmosphere: 7/10
A good release. While there are some minor mistakes, it’s nothing grave. Well played.