Script/typesetting review: [Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy – 01

More reviews of short shows before doing full-length stuff.

More reviews of short shows before doing full-length stuff.

Apparently this show is quite the thing. I haven’t played any of Falcom’s games, so I’m just going to assume they didn’t fuck up any of the terminology.

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Editing

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_00.26_[2014.01.21_11.01.34]

Why isn’t the green part translated too?

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_00.31_[2014.01.21_11.02.23]

Literally dying here.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_00.40_[2014.01.21_11.03.55]

I have no idea what this line means.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_00.56_[2014.01.21_11.05.53]

Remove the first “the”.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.05_[2014.01.21_11.06.57]

?????

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.11_[2014.01.21_11.07.21]

Don’t do this.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.13_[2014.01.21_11.08.08]

You had ?! before. Holy shit.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.21_[2014.01.21_11.09.00]

do->do to him

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.22_[2014.01.21_11.09.43]

Why are there ellipses? His line doesn’t trail off. He just says it normally, then the girl speaks immediately after.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.24_[2014.01.21_11.10.27]

Time to add “bothersome place” to the list of things no one ever says in English.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.35_[2014.01.21_11.12.05]

The ? should be outside the quotation marks since it’s not part of the quote.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.39_[2014.01.21_11.12.55]

pls no

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.39_[2014.01.21_11.13.15]

pls just end the torture

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.42_[2014.01.21_11.13.43]

I CAN SEE THE END OF THE FILE. I’M ALMOST THERE!

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.49_[2014.01.21_11.14.41]

Pretty sure this is more like “But you’re not even a maiden yourself!” or something since he’s a guy.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.53_[2014.01.21_11.15.27]

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.55_[2014.01.21_11.15.43]

is this trolling

Typesetting

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_00.00_[2014.01.21_11.00.30]

Horrible styling.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_00.26_[2014.01.21_11.01.34]

Font is round while the sign is square. Also, looks like no blur.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_00.35_[2014.01.21_11.03.16]

This is torture.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_00.43_[2014.01.21_11.04.37]

rip me

There are a bunch more signs like this that I am going to spare you from seeing. They’re all bad.

[Falcom Sub Team jpk] Everyone Assemble! Falcom Academy - 01.mkv_snapshot_01.26_[2014.01.21_11.11.10]

what are margins? nawejawnhejaj2h3H@:#HHJ:WMK:HD:HJSEJKL:FJSDK:FJjk;sdjftgjkl;sdht

Grades

I think grading this release would give it far more legitimacy that it deserves. Subbing this badly is not acceptable. If you don’t know what you’re doing, just don’t fucking release it. Or ask someone who knows what they’re doing.

This entry was posted by herkz.

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