Script/typesetting review: [Vivid] Stella Jogakuin Koutouka C3-bu – 04

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Editing
Typesetting
Grades

Editing

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So buttmad. Also honorifics don’t even seem to matter in this show. Thanks, Xythitler.

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Why typeset it if you’re not going to translate it? E-peen?

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-up

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Apparently what Karila calls her actually matters (Yurako vs. Li’l Yura) but I don’t really understand it so whatever.

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B-But… fun is banned. How can you have fun and win??

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I usually see people say “airsoft” when they mean the guns, not like how it’s used here. Maybe “enjoy playing airsoft”?

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Yeah, I don’t think this works. I’d go with “kind of airsoft” or “style of airsoft”. Because right now it could mean “You have you own airsoft gun, Yura.” Also, like the next 5 lines all reference this and it sounds very weird.

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Ughhhhhhhh, this just sounds so fucking weird.

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“But I’d still like to improve enough to really win.”

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L-Lewd.

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Now that is what I like to see.

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Also known as “unfolding.”

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Perfect use of italics for emphasis.

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Where’s my TL note, man?

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:Japan:

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I like this translation very much.

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airgun->airsoft gun

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:deep:

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Even though she says “field” in English, I think I prefer “grounds” like what Commie had.

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“I think I’ll start…” etc.

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Yes, this is very good.

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My thoughts exactly. What the fuck is going on in this show?

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Way too long for the audio.

Typesetting

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Linebreaks like this make me cry. I also like this dialogue style the least out of the three.

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Have to say I like Commie’s font with the gaps in the letters more, but this is pretty good too.

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The styling is way too close to the edges.

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Here be some typHELLO DIALOGUE HERE

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Why so much blur?

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>not localizing yen to USD
>2013

But really, this is good.

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Hey, finally more typesetting. And there’s no problems.

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It looks a little too dark on the left side to me.

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Now that’s more like it.

Grades

Editing: 4.5/5. I don’t really like their terminology, but I have to admit the rest was very good.

Typesetting: B+. Would be an A, but there’s really not enough signs (at least for this episode).

Timing: No problems.

I guess this is the part where I say which release out of the three I like best. I think Commie and Vivid are very close. Commie has much better terminology, but I think Vivid handled the rest better. On the other hand, Commie has worse typesetting but I like their styling and lack of retarded linebreaks a lot more. Basically, just pick whichever is first if you don’t care, or which has or doesn’t have honorifics if that matters to you. Anime-Koi and HorribleSubs are both quite inferior, though.

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14 thoughts on “Script/typesetting review: [Vivid] Stella Jogakuin Koutouka C3-bu – 04

  1. I love Commie, but I’m going with Vivid here just because they did such a great job with UTW on Gargantia. I love how a new group has grown so well (even if it’s full of vets) and gotten so appreciated in the community.

    • The people that work on this show are all from Commie. Anime-Koi’s translator is too.

      Basically, enjoy you’re Commie.

      • So is Anime-Koi’s translator crazy and translates the show twice differently?

        Also I heard it’s mainly Commie, but what’s with honorifics then and it being so different from how Commie generally does stuff?

        • No, all three of the translators are in Commie though.

          Also I have no idea what your second comment means.

          • Worded that weird. Commie generally leaves out honorifics, so why does Vivid leave them in?

          • Futsuu said he wanted to be lazy with this show.

            Didn’t work out so well.

          • Because we’re not Commie and have no particular policy on honorific use. For this show, the staff decided to leave them in.

      • Technically, only two out of the five people who work on this show (the translator and timer/typesetter) are also in Commie, and they’re in other groups besides that. We’ve got our own identity separate from whatever other groups our members happen to be in.

          • Translator: Futsuu
            Editor: Devana
            Timer/Typesetter: unanimated
            Encoder: Eien
            QC: thecowgoesmoo

  2. And thus, the machinations of the self-sustaining construct known as “fansubbing” go on~

  3. The terminology differences really trumped anything else for me. Ow well, I am not missing much besides unanimated being unanimated.

    @Xythar
    staff rolls are good. would love to hear the ones for the rest of your current shows too.

  4. >I usually see people say “airsoft” when they mean the guns, not like how it’s used here. Maybe “enjoy playing airsoft”?
    I’m going to disagree with you here. I think using “airsoft” to refer both to the guns and the sport as a whole works perfectly fine. Like how one uses “football” to refer to both the actual ball and the sport as a whole.
    >There are plenty of ways to enjoy football.

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