Apparently this show is quite the thing. I haven’t played any of Falcom’s games, so I’m just going to assume they didn’t fuck up any of the terminology.

Editing
Typesetting
Grades

Editing

Why isn’t the green part translated too?

Literally dying here.

I have no idea what this line means.

Remove the first “the”.

?????

Don’t do this.

You had ?! before. Holy shit.

do->do to him

Why are there ellipses? His line doesn’t trail off. He just says it normally, then the girl speaks immediately after.

Time to add “bothersome place” to the list of things no one ever says in English.

The ? should be outside the quotation marks since it’s not part of the quote.

pls no

pls just end the torture

I CAN SEE THE END OF THE FILE. I’M ALMOST THERE!

Pretty sure this is more like “But you’re not even a maiden yourself!” or something since he’s a guy.

is this trolling

Typesetting

Horrible styling.

Font is round while the sign is square. Also, looks like no blur.

This is torture.

rip me

There are a bunch more signs like this that I am going to spare you from seeing. They’re all bad.

what are margins? nawejawnhejaj2h3H@:#HHJ:WMK:HD:HJSEJKL:FJSDK:FJjk;sdjftgjkl;sdht

Grades

I think grading this release would give it far more legitimacy that it deserves. Subbing this badly is not acceptable. If you don’t know what you’re doing, just don’t fucking release it. Or ask someone who knows what they’re doing.

This entry was posted by herkz.