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Script Review: [JK] Vividred Operation – 02 This entry was posted by brainchild.

Leave it to EveTaku and GotWoot to come up with shitty joint names.

[JK] Vividred Operation - 02 [720p-Hi10P][6CAF6BDC].mkv_snapshot_03.45_[2013.02.10_23.39.24]

What was I talking about again?

f/a/ggotry: 4/5 – Really gay. Honorifics included; English translation, transliteration, and k-timing for the opening and ending.

I don’t think the grandpa is so stuck up that he wouldn’t contract “it” and “will” while talking.

Wow, the directing for this show is really good! I can’t place my finger on why, though…

Mmm… Some quality CGI.

The show is licensed by Aniplex, so unless you’ve read the manga to know incarnate engine is the way to go, you should probably use the official terminology.

I’d love it if this was intentional on the part of the editor or translator, but I’m not sure if EveTaku or GotWoot have an editor. Still, this woman’s in a high enough position that she can get away without using contractions. You lucked out this time.

Excellent QC work. That’s what the leechers are for, right?

Hey, Bro! Good day, Sir. How are you, Ma’am? Sup, Dude? Fuck you, Bitch!

There’s no reason to capitalize “miss” here.

A+ dialogue.

That was just her penis.

There’s some symbolism in this scene. I’m sure of it.

This show is so unrealistic.

Excellent villainy dialogue. You missed the perfect opportunity to reference Scooby-Doo. You know I never would’ve missed it.

Once again, the joint’s resources are being put to excellent use. Luckily, I don’t give a shit about karaoke.

“I won’t lose!” would make more sense given the preceding lines. Otherwise, “I can’t lose”?

TL;DR? It’s good.

There were only two hilariously bad lines. It’s good enough otherwise. I only question why EveTaku and GotWoot decided to joint when neither has an editor or any quality control. Usually, groups form joints to fill roles current staffers don’t want to do. In their case, they could really use someone whose express purpose is contracting words.

Tags: evetaku, fansub, good, gotwoot, jk, review, script, shitty joint name, vividred

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8 thoughts on “Script Review: [JK] Vividred Operation – 02”

Jonathan Tappan on 2013-02-12 at 02:05 said:

Hey, Bro! Good day, Sir. How are you, Ma’am? Sup, Dude? Fuck you, Bitch!

There’s no reason to capitalize “miss” here.

I disagree. “Miss”, “Ma’am” and “Sir” are English honorifics and should always be capitalized. So should honorific titles like “Dr.” or “Senator”.

“Bro”, “dude” and “bitch” are slang and should generally not be capitalized since the use of slang implies informality and a lack of respect. The primary exception would be if the speaker is using them as nicknames.

Also “miss” without a capital reads like “fail to hit the target”.

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- brainchild on 2013-02-12 at 03:07 said:
  
  No… to everything.
  
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  - wat on 2013-02-22 at 10:11 said:
    
    Well, you are wrong.
    
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- animegio on 2013-02-22 at 18:15 said:
  
  > “Miss”, “Ma’am” and “Sir” are English honorifics and should always be capitalized.
  Uh, no. They’re almost never capitalized.
  http://grammarpartyblog.com/2013/02/18/when-to-capitalize-sir-and-madam/
  
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KODA on 2013-03-06 at 12:37 said:

Since GG disabled the comments I have to ask here, are there going to be notes for the latest joshi ?

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bagong016 on 2013-03-10 at 06:59 said:

where’s the notes for Joshiraku OVA?

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- KODA on 2013-03-18 at 16:05 said:
  
  Vale sama doko death ka ?
  
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Avdol on 2013-04-12 at 02:04 said:

Vale, are you dead?

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